#3, #4, #5 and #8 work as logos. Others don't because they're just clipart-like image against type that we're very used with non-pro brands or self-branded local businesses.
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#3 and #8 are actually a different version of the same logo. I like the brand symbol that's applicable on its own (clothing stitched labels) and serves as brand recognition symbol. The only problem I see with this symbol is thinness of lines. They will be very hard to produce on stitched labels which is likely something they'll do. Clothing companies usually have branded labels on their clothes anyway.
#4 and #5 would be usable for a speciality clothing shop, but not for a clothing production brand.
And let's say that others are simply not suitable for reasons of application and visual logo design. And if I may say those ladies don't really look like virgins. I'd say they look quite the opposite. :)
And since circle is quite a bit used in logos (which is not a bad thing as it's very natural and pleasing) you could change that shape into stylized panties shape to make it more obvious when symbol would be presented without textual part.
That's not required of course. You could go with some other symbol, that relates to virginity. A butterfly being one for instance. But if you do go with a non-circular shape, it will become much harder to incorporate anything else long with it, because it's very hard to make two symbols to work as a single one.
In such case I'd rather opt for two logo variations:
- the full one where symbol is together with full worded text
- the symbol with VL text only - and use this one for labels
Unless symbol is super distinctive it couldn't be used on its own. At least not until this brand becomes widely recognised by target market.
I know it's a cliche with such brands but have you tried Bodoni or any other modern serif type with your design? I'm not convinced by your transitional font selection - hard to say which one it is due to small size but based on g it could be one of Robert Slimbach's designs - Minion or more likely Warnock.
And yes. Keep your colours. Very suitable.