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Aug
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comment Design critique for 36“ x 24” poster announcing coffee shop re-opening
addressing the issue of "function" -- the poster was supposed to announce that the Cafe is 'Now Open'. I wanted 'Now Open' to be large enough that people 10 or 20 feet away could read it and want to walk into the cafe, but at 36" wide and 24" high, i simply could not figure out how large to make the text. I also was then concerned about the large size of the cup. I felt compelled to keep things at a reasonable size, but ended up with little visual hierarchy that tells viewers what is the main message.
Aug
29
comment Design critique for 36“ x 24” poster announcing coffee shop re-opening
thank you! that was the kind of feedback i was looking for.
Aug
29
comment Design critique for 36“ x 24” poster announcing coffee shop re-opening
thanks very much. very useful insights.
Aug
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awarded  Student
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awarded  Editor
Aug
28
revised Design critique for 36“ x 24” poster announcing coffee shop re-opening
as per requests, I elaborated on what aspects I wanted feedback on, and provided an updated link to the poster.
Aug
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asked Design critique for 36“ x 24” poster announcing coffee shop re-opening