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Aug 29 |
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Design critique for 36“ x 24” poster announcing coffee shop re-opening addressing the issue of "function" -- the poster was supposed to announce that the Cafe is 'Now Open'. I wanted 'Now Open' to be large enough that people 10 or 20 feet away could read it and want to walk into the cafe, but at 36" wide and 24" high, i simply could not figure out how large to make the text. I also was then concerned about the large size of the cup. I felt compelled to keep things at a reasonable size, but ended up with little visual hierarchy that tells viewers what is the main message. |
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Aug 29 |
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Design critique for 36“ x 24” poster announcing coffee shop re-opening thank you! that was the kind of feedback i was looking for. |
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Aug 29 |
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Design critique for 36“ x 24” poster announcing coffee shop re-opening thanks very much. very useful insights. |
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Aug 28 |
awarded | Student |
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Aug 28 |
awarded | Editor |
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Aug 28 |
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Design critique for 36“ x 24” poster announcing coffee shop re-opening as per requests, I elaborated on what aspects I wanted feedback on, and provided an updated link to the poster. |
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Aug 28 |
asked | Design critique for 36“ x 24” poster announcing coffee shop re-opening |