I have the following design (in two variations):
It is not final yet. Ultimately I need to show that monsoon brings rain. I will add rain elements around clouds later.
My main doubt is about the clouds used for o and oo, respectively. My goal is to represent clouds without losing much readability. Personally, I really feel clouds are representing the letters well enough.
Is this good in terms of readability and representing clouds? Is there something obvious which I can improve?