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Copy doesn't actually make sense....
- "We additionally we be racing..."
- "Lights out and away we go" So it's racing in the dark??
The map pins are superfluous, distracting, and unnecessary.
Why is "Silverstone" all uppercase and underlined in the top image? If it's not a link, don't underline anything. Use boldface or italic.
All uppercase type is generally more difficult to read for people, especially in the middle of other copy. Avoid all uppercase when you can.
Who is "We"? Is it Powerlight/Fitgerald? It doesn't appear to be. Those just look like tacked on logos after the fact. This looks more like an announcement for Cliosport. Is that the "we"?
The typeface used for the copy in the top image is too thin and has too low contrast.
The way the Cliosport logo and "championship" are two different line lengths bothers me. It's just inherently unbalanced.
Is that actually the Cliosport logo? I can't find anything similar -- https://cliosport.net/ (It may be a legitimate logo that the internet doesn't seem to know about)
Dirty, rough, mock up....
I would also change the typeface for the race events.. but I didn't feel like typing those out....