I am doing a slider image which includes a lot of typography and yeah art and I am running out of ideas as to how to portray the idea of SAVE! SAVE as in SAVE 10% more or something that you see in the ads. Save like this:
So I was wondering if anyone of you have any suggestions as to how I can portray the save sign. I've already done a few revisions but unfortunately, my client STILL doesn't like them.
Can you help me to pinpoint what it is they might not like?
Can you recommend improvements based on your observations?
Attached are my revisions/ideas:
this is what my client said during first revision:
We need to re-work this slide. Our fault for not telling you what should be emphasized. We will rank 1- in order of importance and what should be largest text. Slide #1- 5% Early Order Discount -#1B Save!Or: Make your money go farther!- This text should be in place of the product pictures. You can use $$ if you want or other creative graphics to get this message across. #1A Text: 1. Expires June 30 #3
- Order Code 5eod (changed) #5
- Other elements to include (don’t to have all, but may if you think appropriate):
A. Free storage for shipment in the fall. #2 B. Guarantee your inventory #4 C. Be first with calendar placement #7 D. Your order will be ready when you are. #6
I eliminated the last 4 lines cause it was making the design too crowded.