There seems to be problems with the thicks and thins of your letters; did you draw the lettering yourself or possibly used a free font?
If this is your first logo it's likely that you might not be perceiving these problems so I will pinpoint a few places where it seems more obvious:
- The vertical of the "h" in the seems too thick
- The right part of the b (in the curve) looks too thin
I think it's good that you aligned the h of "the" with the b of "bent" but the vertical in the "h" looks too heavy and also the space between the first two lines is a lot tighter than the spacing between "bent" and "tens". I would be tempted to write "THE" in caps, pretty small, so the spacing would look more equal in between all lines... or change the alignment or the "t" of "tens" so that again, the spacing might look more uniform.
Some letters don't seem to be fully sitting on the baseline. In "tens", the "e" and "s" seem to be floating a bit.
I would try to work the spacing between the letters so that both words seems to be aligned together.