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I am a noob to photoshop, however I have been able to make this, I have a liking for minimalism : enter image description here

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How can I improve this, make this perfect?
Thanks!

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Work on scale. The type vs. the logomark, for example. How would this look printed at 50%? You'd hardly be able to read the type.

Why the overlap? Why the shadow? These aren't bad, per se, but when you say you like minimalism, these would typically be seen as superfluous to that.

What's the thought behind the typeface? do you feel the loose script face works well with the very geometric mark?

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  • Okay, I'll work on the scale. I though it still looked minimalistic even with shadows, if I remove them the logo just looks so bland. I thought the typeface loooked good but I cant say as I lack experience in designing. Please do suggest how would you do it. Thanks!
    – SamFlynn
    Commented Oct 4, 2015 at 22:38
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For me that black color feels slightly eye hurting, because when we look at this then it seems that all the attention is drawn towards the black color.

And the font goes against the minimalism. I have changed the color slightly and got this.

enter image description here

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  • Hey! definitely looks better now. Do you have a .psd file for this that you could share with me? Because I have no idea where to start to get those shadows on each object and the font too. You will make my work easier. Thanks!
    – SamFlynn
    Commented Oct 5, 2015 at 4:03
  • You could mail it to me [email protected] Thanks
    – SamFlynn
    Commented Oct 5, 2015 at 4:55
  • Can you put it in a google drive folder and then email the link to me? I'll be ever so grateful.
    – SamFlynn
    Commented Oct 5, 2015 at 5:21
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    Fixedsys Regular
    – reachrk
    Commented Oct 5, 2015 at 17:44

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