Something is amiss about this logo I've made for myself. I am a design student, and soon-to-be graduate. This logo will go on my business card and possibly other promo things in order to allow me to present myself professionally.

In relation to the actual piece - I designed with the theme of elegance in mind, I want to portray myself as a fresh, young but old-school designer that has an appreciation for crisp, clean design, though isn't afraid to go wild.

Do you think the typography represents this persona, how about the positioning? I really want to get it right...

For the moment it is b&w, but will add colour once I get criticism from people.
![Logo 1][1]
![logo 2: emboldened'A' ][3]


  [1]: https://i.sstatic.net/ykAYa.png
  [2]: https://i.sstatic.net/ijEZK.png
  [3]: https://i.sstatic.net/VWCQL.png