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meant to just improve the title, but added stuff elsewhere aswell, previous edits were great, I hope to have just polished it
Dom
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Critique: Do these text-based logos convey elegance, and is the positioning comfortable?

Something is amiss about this logo I've made for myself. I am a design student, and soon-to-be graduate. This logo will go on my business card and possibly other promo things in order to allow me to present myself professionally.

In relation to the actual piece - I designed with the theme of elegance in mind, I want to portray myself as a fresh, young but old-school designer that has an appreciation for crisp, clean design, though isn't afraid to go wild.

###Logo 1 Logo 1

###Logo 2 logo 2: emboldened'A'

My questions are:

  1. Do you think the below logo's (Logo 1 & Logo 2) typography represent the persona of elegance?
  2. How comfortable is the positioning of text in each logo?
  3. Is the positioning of Logo 1 better than Logo 2?

For the moment I have only designed my logos as black and white but I do plan to add color to it later on.